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6/28/0814:20 Jun 28 2008
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Winter in Summers' dawn
The quick change from bright to dark
That consuming fire of flames iridescent
The pain with no remedy
Walking from place to place, head held low
That blank smile, a nod to face
Hollow, stinging and empty
Hoping to just let go
Friends and family bring sounds of joy
My ears only hear the screams of death
Sitting alone, feeling nauseas with heart aching
What is it that drives me this way?
What is it that keeps my life from moving forward?
A cold wind blows with a stinging chill
My body aches and my soul can no longer keep flight
A river of tears my will can no longer hold back
Those pounding questions, will it continue, shall I let it, can I stop it?
Brought to the prepuce of life and death, such sweet moanings
Begging the choice to become apparent
I just don't know
I am as the scent of a fading light, my soul too thin
I don't understand
Walls of alabaster break down into walls of iron which close in about me
The breath of life, it seems, flees my very lungs
Oh God it hurts
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COMMENTS
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Sinora
15:32 Jun 28 2008
I for one will never believe that your Soul will forget how to fly, though your wings may ache like hell sometimes, the wild blue yonder is all yours. xxx
morbidcuriousity
04:35 Jun 29 2008
Beautiful as always. You write with such passion and intensity.
Kyriele
20:49 Oct 25 2008
It's resonating. I feel all of it, including the absolute hopelessness of hopelessness. sigh
Rylynn
21:38 Nov 17 2008
Very nice poem/poems I do enjoy poetry and yours has caught my attention do keep up I have some of my own ttyl.. chaio!~
demonlovesyou
18:34 Dec 13 2008
Very painful
lovely poem of very lovely rhyme flown through valley of the caring hearts.
MoonGoddess
08:30 Jul 04 2009
Taunting....nice
Innocent
15:13 Jul 15 2009
This was very touching . I even got tears in my eyes.
Why dont you write poems anymoore ?
evilsandwich
15:25 Aug 10 2009
that was lovely ^_^
VampireLover91
01:51 Sep 11 2009
This is so sad =/
I love it!